I had a quick look into the relevant paragraphs.
showroute provides a list of waypoints that you use specify the start and end points of segments that represent of your travels.
Is grammar fine?
Mapview should be
italic just like
showroute.
Click on a segment then hold shift while clicking
Should the "shift key" be highlighted, e.g. "shift" or <SHIFT> or
shift? Or even add the word "key"?
If you already have any segments selected for the route in Travel Mapping from a previous .list file submission
"Mapped" instead of "selected"?
I prefer having .list file indicated with < code > tags like we have on the production server.